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III. Sample Passages *(c)*

(a) how the War affected people
(b) the Germans
(c) casualties of the War

Godwin examines war casualties from many different angles: military and civilian, physical and psychological-spiritual. Below are three samples.

(i) One hot afternoon Godwin witnesses on an improvised parade square a rather ugly encounter between an officer and an enlisted man.

"One day, while physical drill was in progress in the now-familiar orchard, he watched a clash between an instructor and a man in the ranks. Was feeling getting so bad that it had come to insubordination?

'Put them arms up!' bawled the instructor.
'Put 'em right up!'

The man raised his arms shoulder high, but no higher. His broad face had upon it a look of obstinacy, a dogged look. The instructor fumed.

'Say, what's the idea? Can't you get an order?'

Stephen watched. Something unpleasant brewing? Perhaps. The order was repeated and now the squad was an audience watching a duel, keyed-up, suppressed.
You could feel the intensity. Authority was challenged. The men stood, neutral, watching. Once again the offender raised his arms, shoulder high, but no higher. The time had come for action.

'Fall that man out!' bawled Stephen.

A ripple of excitement passed over the ranks. The climax was at hand. The man stood at attention before Stephen and Stephen looked directly into his eyes. Somberly they returned his steady gaze. The man was flushed, his chest heaved; his emotional stress hurt like the unhappiness of a small child.

'Now, what's the matter?' Stephen asked.
'That's the matter, sir,' bitterly.

He had opened his grey shirt and bared a shoulder that was livid from the surgeon's knife and laced with the surgeon's stitches.

'I can't get that arm up,sir', he protested, his face dark. Yet even now, with a grievance heavy upon him, his eyes were those of one who laughs easily and often.

'Why have you been sent back?' Stephen asked, shocked.

'Well, sir, there was a call for men and I was put on the draft at the reserve, marked G. S.'

So that was how it was, they were now shovelling the wounded back into the line; it was enough, it seemed, if the man could march. Stephen thought, That does not go out here. He said: 'Do what you can. I'll report the matter.'

He made a report and it lacked somewhat the coldness of official language; yes, it breathed his indignation. And presently he received orders to have his casualty ready to parade for medical inspection. A Medical Officer of the Royal Army Medical Corps, was going to oblige his Canadian comrades, since he was the nearest M.O. available.

He came on a horse and drew up in the lane outside the orchard. Stephen had his case ready. He was paraded, complete with Non-Commissioned Officer. But there was no examination. Only a few indifferent questions. And a moment later Stephen stepped back to avoid the restive horse as the rider swung its head. The Medical Officer had made his diagnosis, it seemed, without dismounting. The man was a lead-swinger. He reported him G. S.

(p. 170)

(ii) Stephen’s commanding officer, Major MacDonald, was a high school principal in Vancouver (Kitsilano) in civilian life. MacDonald has been through the nightmare of the Somme battles and seems traumatized by the experience; in any case, this experience is something which he cannot begin to share adequately with his men:

"Who could have foreseen a war? Who could have imagined that war would be like this? Certainly not Malcolm MacDonald.

And now he talked about the Somme. His mind always came back to that battle. He talked about the war impersonally; but about the Somme he spoke in a proprietorial way. There was even affection in his voice. The battle, in memory, had become dear to him. He went over, again and again, every phase of it as he had lived and suffered it. It was the morbid affection of the leper for his sores, of the bereaved for the afflicting sorrow. The battle was his, and he would tell you of it because it was not yours, and you could share it only vicariously with him.

His life was broken in two parts. The Somme divided them. It had broken his life in two, so that it was like a bridge that was cleft at the crowning span. To get to the past it was necessary to think: before the Somme; after the Somme.

The battle became an orb, and the major revolved about it like a satellite. The battle, the battle that had got into his bones, into his flesh, into the whirling electrons of his brain’s cells. He was dyed in the battle. Its living memory coloured his thoughts by day, his dreams by night.

He would sit at times, the papers of his routine work untouched before him, his calm sweet eyes looking out steadfastly, absorbed in the invisible. They looked out; yet they looked in. And he would stir suddenly and turn, like one continuing a talk in progress, continuing aloud his silent musings. And they would simulate interest, these subalterns, glance swiftly and furtively at one another. Humour him.

For the Somme belonged to the Major. It was his. He had a right to it. If he shared it with them freely, they were yet on sufferance and must remember it. What he gave of that experience they must accept, for he was privy to a mystery sealed to them.

And as suddenly as he broke into words, he would lapse back into abstracted silence, sitting still, his face clouded by memory, withdrawn from them."(‘Why Stay We Here?’, pp. 71-2)

(iii) Stephen and his batman, Pilk, are sent behind the line to a rest billet with a French widow and her daughter. The following passage tells something about civilian suffering.

"The coffee, in a great pot, was fragrant. They drank copiously, savouring the good taste of it. Madame, meanwhile, had vanished to her own domain, a mysterious region barred by an immense cabinet. But the child remained, finger in mouth, wide-eyed and full of childish curiosity for strange men speaking words beyond her understanding.

Stephen beckoned the little thing, and she came, shyly, and sat upon his knee. He kissed her, fondled her flaxen hair.

Did he kiss her, or, in her, did he kiss his absent little son?

The child recognised in him the father-man and screwed his buttons round in little hands, flirting with her eyes, innocently.

A child. Innocence, trust, affection. Sweet things indeed.

A succession of men, remote and mysterious. Comings and goings. Some passed her by, big and creaking, with loud, alarming voices. But a few, like this thin man who came to her with his slow father smile, took stock of her. But none of them replaced the one who had gone without returning, the bearded man, with black strong hair, who slept beside her Maman. He man she had called Papa. No, these foreign officers, they could not take her father’s place; not even the gendarme who came evening after evening to sit abstractedly while her Maman bustled about her work; following her black figure with his protruding eyes, sitting there smoking his long, thin cigar, with his big drooping moustache and nose that drooped in sympathy. He never seemed to notice her." ("Why Stay We Here?", p. 123).

 
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